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Thursday 19 June 2014

hot summer day


On a hot summer day I went to the beach. I could feel my feet burning and I was like who’s cooking chicken. Then I ran to the beach water and had a swim. My feet and body were really cold. Then I ran straight out of the water and laid back down on my towel.

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you described how your feet burning smelt Tihi. Keep up the creative writing.

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